Sū Mù ZhēSu Mu Zhe 苏幕遮
Zhou Bangyan on a summer morning: lotus leaves standing up in the wind after rain.
Original Chinese text with pinyin
燎沉香
liáo chén xiāng
消溽暑
xiāo rù shǔ
鸟雀呼晴
niǎo què hū qíng
侵晓窥檐语
qīn xiǎo kuī yán yǔ
叶上初阳干宿雨
yè shàng chū yáng gàn sù yǔ
水面清圆
shuǐ miàn qīng yuán
一一风荷擧
yī yī fēng hé jǔ
Simplified characters; traditional title: 蘇幕遮. This is a long poem; only the best-known lines are shown, and “……” marks omitted passages.
Note on the text: This page presents a well-known excerpt; the full poem is longer in the traditional corpus.
English translation
Burning agarwood incense
to dispel the muggy heat.
Birds call for clear skies,
peeping at dawn, chattering under the eaves.
On the leaves the first sun dries last night's rain;
on the water, clear and round,
one by one, the lotus leaves lift in the wind.
Original translation by Poetune — literal but poetic, written for this site.
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Meaning and imagery
Zhou Bangyan on a summer morning: lotus leaves standing up in the wind after rain. The scene stays with you.
Background
Zhou Bangyan on a summer morning: lotus leaves standing up in the wind after rain.
Key words
- 沉香 chén xiāng
- key word in the poem
- 溽暑 rù shǔ
- key word in the poem
- 鸟雀 niǎo què
- key word in the poem
About the poet: Zhou Bangyan
Zhou Bangyan is often called the orthodox master of ci.
Lifetime: 1056–1121. Other famous works: Su Mu Zhe (苏幕遮).